किसने सोचा था कि लगभग महीने भर चलने वाले लीग के पहले दौर में अंतिम 3-4 दिन 6 टीमों का भाग्य तय करेंगे। यह लेख लिखते समय 24 जुलाई के मैच में टीम 8 (Rishabh Tiwari) के विरुद्ध टीम 6 (मोहन रैगर मौर्य) ने अपना सबसे शक्तिशाली पात्र उतारकर टीम 7 (प्रहलाद दुबे) की मुश्किलें कुछ आसान कर दी हैं, जो पहले दौर का अंतिम मैच टीम 6 के विरुद्ध जीतकर अंतिम 4 में आने का प्रयास करेंगे। तब तक टीम 7 के पास डोगा, चंडकाल, नागदंत जैसे शक्तिशाली किरदार होंगे जबकि टीम 6 के पास डॉक्टर स्ट्रेंज के अलावा कुछ अच्छे सहायक किरदार तो हैं, लेकिन अगर प्रहलाद डोगा चुनते हैं तो शायद उन्हें इस लीग में पांचवी हार के बाद 4 अंकों के साथ ही संतोष करना पड़ेगा। वर्तमान में सातवें स्थान से लगातार 2 मैच जीतकर अंतिम चार में आना प्रहलाद के लिए बड़ी उपलब्धि होगी।
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Monday, 24 July 2023
CCL - 3 दिन - 3 आर या पार मुकाबले! (25, 26 और 27 July...)
एक के बाद एक 3 नॉकआउट मैच
1. टीम 1 (Prakash Sharma) बनाम टीम 4 (Saransh Rishi) [25 July 2023] - इसमें भोकाल, प्रचंडा बचाए बैठे प्रकाश का पलड़ा भारी है। मुझे अबतक उनकी रणनीति ख़ास पसंद नहीं आई। अगर धनंजय बनाम सौडांगी के मुकाबले में बराबरी के बजाय उन्हें हार मिलती तो वे पहले ही बाहर हो चुके होते। अगर वे जीत भी जाते हैं, तो ज़्यादा से ज़्यादा 7 अंकों के साथ उन्हें अन्य टीमों के मुक़ाबलों के परिणाम और वोट शेयर के भरोसे रहना पड़ेगा। वहीं सारांश अपने अंतिम मुक़ाबले में अगर जीतते हैं तो 8 अंकों के साथ अंतिम चार में आ जाएंगे। उनके द्वारा शुरुआती दौर में वैद्य चक्रमाचार्य को चुनना और मुकाबले में भी उतारना, मैं इस लीग की सबसे बड़ी गलतियों में से एक मानता हूं। यहां उन्होंने अपनी निजी पसंद को जनता की पसंद मानने की भूल की...जो बड़े किरदारों में समझ आती है, लेकिन वैद्य चक्रमाचार्य तो भारतीय कॉमिक्स के टॉप 100 सहायक किरदारों में भी अपना नाम ना बना पाएं। हालांकि, बाद में टीम 4 ने शानदार वापसी की और सम्मानजनक स्थिति तक आई।
2. टीम 2 (Manoj Kumar Garg) बनाम टीम 3 (Pritesh Chakraborty) [26 July 2023] - जैसे प्रहलाद के पास डोगा है वैसे ही मनोज के पास ध्रुव जैसा ट्रंप कार्ड है। अगर मनोज जोखिम लेते हैं और ध्रुव के अलावा कोई अन्य किरदार मैदान में आता है तो टीम 3 डेडपूल, कालदूत, बाबा गोरखनाथ जैसे किरदारों से उलटफेर करने की कोशिश कर सकती है।
3. टीम 5 (Sachin Kumar) बनाम टीम 8 (Rishabh Tiwari) [27 July 2023] - ये दोनों ही टीम सीमित साधनों में अच्छा प्रदर्शन करने की वजह से मेरी पसंदीदा रही हैं। यहां फिर एकदम अंतिम दौर होने के कारण ये मुक़ाबला बराबरी का हो सकता है। टीम 5 के पास अब लोकप्रिय किरदारों में ब्लाइंड डेथ और किलविष हैं और टीम 8 शक्ति, थॉर मैदान में उतार सकती है। शक्ति जहां मुख्य किरदारों में है, लेकिन इंस्पेक्टर स्टील की तरह उनका फैंडम भी कुछ हल्का है। ऐसे में शक्तिमान सीरियल से जुड़ी बचपन की यादें किलविष को शक्ति / थॉर और टीम 8 का इस लीग का किल-स्विच बना सकती हैं। #ज़हन #CCL
Sunday, 6 June 2021
Tushar Trivedi's Ideas
आज अहमदाबाद के तुषार त्रिवेदी साहब का जन्मदिन है। एक दौर था जब इनकी और रुड़की निवासी मयंक शर्मा की परिकल्पनाओं पर कई कॉमिक्स (Raj Comics) प्रकाशित हुई। इतनी कि कहा जा सकता है कि विवेक मोहन जी को अंग्रेजी फ्रेज़ "run for his money" प्रतिस्पर्धा मिली।
अच्छा लगा कि उस समय जो रचनाकार, कलाकार हमें डेमीगॉड सरीखे लगते थे उनमें अपने जैसे नाम आने लगे। तुषार भाई के स्टोरी प्लॉट्स पर शानदार कॉमिक्स बनती रहीं फिर राज कॉमिक्स थोड़ी डाउन हुई और तुषार भाई भी अपने कारोबार में व्यस्त हो गए। मुझे पूरा यकीन है कि अब भी उनके पास कई बेहतरीन आईडिया होंगे जो कभी आगे कॉमिक्स प्रेमियों को पढ़ने को मिलेंगे। जन्मदिन मुबारक, तुषार भाई!
#ज़हन
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Location:
Ahmedabad, Gujarat, India
Sunday, 1 September 2019
देवेन पाण्डेय का प्रशंसक से लेखक बनने का सफर #ICUFC
"यह समूह कॉमिक्स से सम्बंधित है,किन्तु मैं यहां अपने द्वितीय उपन्यास से सम्बंधित पोस्ट कर रहा हूँ।
क्यो? क्योकि इस उपन्यास की नींव इसी ग्रुप में पड़ी थी, अब नए सदस्य जुड़ गए है जिन्हें शायद याद नही किन्तु पुराने सदस्यों को अब भी वह समय याद है जब यह ग्रुप विभिन्न पोस्ट और टिप्पणियों से आबाद रहा करता था।
उस समय क्रिएटिविटी अपने चरम पर होती थी। हर सदस्य अपने आप मे कोई न कोई अनूठी बात लिये होता था। अनेक प्रतियोगिताएं होती थी, अनेक फैन्स अपने चित्र, फैन फ़िक्शन इत्यादि यहां शेयर किया करते थे।
काफी पुराने पाठक इस समूह के जरिये दोबारा कॉमिक्स से जुड़े (जिनमे मैं भी शामिल हूँ।) यहां आकर पता चला यह समूह प्रतिभाशाली सदस्यों से भरा हुआ है। यहां से अनेक सदस्य फैन होने से लेकर क्रिएटिव जगत में अपनी अलग पहचान बनाने तक का सफर पूर्ण कर चुके है। लगभग 6-7 वर्ष पहले जब यह समूह विभिन्न प्रकार की हलचलों से आबाद रहता था उसी समय बाली के कथानक ने जन्म लिया था। अन्य मित्रों को देखकर मुझे भी कुछ लिखने बनाने का मन होने लगा, मैंने भी एजेंट नाइन सीरीज की 3 कॉमिक्स स्वयं बनाई, कथा,चित्र,रंग सभी खुद किये। धुरंधर पाण्डेय नामक चरित्र भी बनाया। वह समय ही अलग स्तर का जोशीला वातावरण लिये हुए था, मुझे याद है #कॉमिक्स-ट्रेंड-फिर-बढ़ाये का अभियान जो हमने आरम्भ किया था😋। उसी समय कुछ बहुमुखी प्रतिभाओं के धनी मित्रों के साथ एक अलग और ओरिजनल फैन फ़िक्शन बनाने की बात चली, जिसमे हम सभी अपने अपने हुनर या कलाकारी को सबके सामने ला सके ।
यश ठाकुर, मोहित शर्मा, नालिनाक्ष ईशु, आशीष खरे,सुरेश जी,अजय थापा, हरेंद्र सैनी जैसे अनेक मित्रों के साथ बाली नामक चरित्र बनता बिगड़ता रहा☺️ यहां तक कि एक सम्पूर्ण 30 पृष्ठों की कॉमिक्स तक बन चुकी थी।
किन्तु होनी को कुछ और ही मंजूर था, विभिन्न कारणों एवं धीरे धीरे दुनियादारी की व्यस्तताओं के चलते सब अलग होने लगे और फैन फ़िक्शन का सपना सपना ही रह गया। समय ने सबका जोश ठंडा कर दिया, वो बचपना अब समझदारी की परतों तले कही छिप सा गया, जीवन की आपाधापी में प्राथमिकताएं बदलती चली गई। नतीजतन बाली अनेक बार बनते बनते बन्द हो गया। इसी समूह से और अपने फैन फ़िक्शन और लेखन से अनेक लोगो से पहचान हुई जिनमे से कुछ स्थापित लेखक और प्रकाशक तक हैं और मेरा पहला उपन्यास 'इश्क बकलोल'प्रकाशित हुआ, जो मेरी पहली ऑफिशयल साकार रचना थी। इश्क बकलोल को उम्मीद से अधिक पसन्द किया गया और पाठकों एवं समीक्षकों का खूब प्यार मिला। अब यहां आकर फिर से हिम्मत जुटने लगी, बाली जेहन में उछल कूद करने लगा और फिर मैंने प्रकाशक को कॉन्सेप्ट बताया, वे फौरन राजी हो गए और मैंने इस बार बिना किसी अन्य टीम के बाली पर कार्य आरम्भ कर दिया, मुश्किलें फिर आई (जिनके बारे में विस्तार से लेखकीय में लिखा है।) किंतु इस बार पक्का निर्णय कर चुका था। और अंततः बाली 420 पृष्ठों के रूप में सजीव हो चुका था। पौराणिक चरित्रों, कथाओं एवं किवदंतियों पर आधारित यह पात्र अब प्रकाशित हो चुका था। हालांकि मैं डर रहा था कि न जाने पाठक क्या प्रतिक्रिया देंगे, सुपरहिरोइक पात्र और कहानियां विदेश में जितनी प्रचलित है, अपने भारतीय परिवेश में वे उतनी सहज नही हैं। किन्तु इसके पश्चात भी पाठकों की अभूतपूर्व प्रतिक्रिया मिली और मेरा उपन्यास प्री ऑर्डर में ही अस्सी प्रतिशत तक समाप्त हो गया। अमेजॉन पर आउट ऑफ स्टॉक होकर पुनः स्टॉक अपडेट किया गया। दूसरी रिलीज के महीने भर के भीतर दूसरी बार रीप्रिंट करवाया गया।
जिन्होंने पढ़ी उनकी प्रतिक्रिया भी शानदार रही और उन्हें यह कथानक बेहद पसंद आया। और इन सबमे इस समूह का भी बड़ा योगदान है। इस समूह एवं उसके सदस्यों ने सदैव से यहां अनेक सृजनशील एवं प्रतिभाशाली सदस्यों का उत्साहवर्धन किया है। तो बाली की उत्स्फूर्त सफलता के लिए एवं प्रतिसाद के लिये मैं इस समूह के प्रत्येक सदस्य का हृदय से आभारी हूँ। और हां कह सकते है, बाली उपन्यास मेरे कॉमिक्स प्रेम और इस समूह को ट्रिब्यूट है ।😋 (मैं यहां कोई खरीदी बिक्री एक लिंक नही दे रहा हूँ, क्योकि मेरा वह उद्देश्य था ही नही।)"
Location:
Mumbai, Maharashtra, India
Friday, 26 August 2016
कॉमिक्स फैन फिक्शन लेखकों के लिए कुछ सुझाव - मोहित शर्मा ज़हन
अपने प्रिय किरदारों को अपनी गढ़ी परिकल्पनाओं में उलझाना हर प्रशंसक को भाता है। वैसा होता तो क्या होता, इस हीरो या विलन अगर फलाने हीरो के विरुद्ध आता तो क्या-क्या दृश्य बनते, किरदार की सभी बातों को बारीकी से समझ कहानी लिखने से लेकर स्थापित आयामो का मुरब्बा तक डाल देते है फैन्स। जहाँ विचार सब करते हैं पर गिने-चुने प्रशंसक ही कलम-कीबोर्ड उठाकर कुछ लिखते हैं। मैंने भारतीय कॉमिक्स खासकर हिंदी कॉमिक्स पर काफी फैन फिक्शन (प्रशंसक-साहित्य) पढ़ा और लिखा है। अपने अनुभव के आधार पर कह सकता हूँ कि कई लोगो की प्रतिभा को अगर सही मार्गदर्शन, मौके मिलें तो वे बहुत अच्छे लेखक बन सकते हैं। कुछ लोग तो कहानी के साथ कला जोड़ कर बेहतरीन कॉमिक्स, कॉमिक स्ट्रिप्स बना डालते हैं। बाहर देशों में अनेकों फैन फिक्शन प्रकाशित हो चुके हैं, उनपर कॉमिक्स-फ़िल्में तक बन चुकी हैं। हालांकि, भारत में ऐसा होने में अभी बहुत समय है।
इस क्षेत्र में जितना जाना उस आधार पर फैन फिक्शन लेखकों, कलाकारों के लिए कुछ सुझाव हैं -
1. केवल एक माध्यम तक सीमित न रहें और कम रेस्पॉन्स मिलने पर (जो शुरुआत में अक्सर होता है) निराश न हों। निरंतर सीखने और अपनी प्रतिभा को निखारने की कोशिश करते रहें। सफल कलाकारों के काम का अवलोकन कर जाने कि उन्होंने ऐसा क्या किया जो वो इस क्षेत्र में सफल हो पाए। ऑनलाइन कॉमिक कम्युनिटी अभी भी काफी छोटी है इसलिए अपने लेख, कहानी, काव्य सिर्फ किरदारों के आस-पास न बुनकर समय-समय अन्य विषयों को चुने ताकि आपकी पहुँच ऑनलाइन हिंदी, इंग्लिश पाठकों तक हो जाए। इस तरह आप पत्र, पत्रिकाओं और संकलन में प्रकाशित हो सकते हैं।
2. सहमति के साथ आप अन्य कलाकारों, लेखकों के साथ कॉलेबोरेट कर सकते हैं। अगर अपने काम से आप सक्षम हैं तो ऐसे कलाकारों को कुछ धनराशि भी ऑफर कर सकते हैं। ऐसा करने से आप अपना दायर बढ़ाने के साथ-साथ विभिन्न शैलियों को मिलाने का काम कर रहे हैं। मिलकर किये गए ऐसे रचनात्मक काम आपको अच्छा अनुभव देते हैं।
3. यह टेस्ट करना ज़रूरी है कि कहीं आप किसी एक या कुछ शैलियों जैसे एक्शन, कॉमेडी, एडवेंचर के गुलाम तो नहीं बन गए हैं और चाहकर भी किसी और प्रकार की कहानी नहीं लिख पा रहें हैं। अगर ऐसा है तो किसी अपरिचित शैली को नए सिरे से उठाने के बजाये उसके एलिमेंट्स ऐसी कहानियों में लाना शुरू करें जिनको लिखने की आपको आदत है। कुछ समय बाद उन शैलियों पर अलग से लिखना शुरू करें।
4. ब्लॉग, फेसबुक, ट्विटर, पिनट्रेस्ट, लिंक्डइन, इंस्टाग्राम का भरपूर प्रयोग करें और अधिक से अधिक आप जैसी बातें फॉलो करने वाले लोगों से जुड़ें। अपनी कहानियां, कलाकृतियां और रचनाएँ केवल 1 या 2 जगह पोस्ट ना करके उनकी वर्ड फाइल, पीडीएफ, ऑडियो स्टोरी, स्लाइडशो आदि बनाकर स्क्राइब्ड, यूट्यूब, ईशु, रीडवेयर, स्मैशवर्डस, टच टैलेंट, बिहेंस, साउंड क्लाउड जैसी वेबसाइटस पर अपलोड करें।
5. अन्य लेखकों और कलाकारों को अपना फीडबैक देते रहना चाहिए। इस से आपका सर्किल मज़बूत होता है और आपको अंदाज़ा लगता है कि कौनसी संभावनाएं या दृश्य कहानी के रूप में कैसे लगते हैं। वैसे छोटी कम्युनिटी में संपर्क, प्रोत्साहन बनाये रखने के लिए इतना करना ज़रूरी है।
6. हर लेखक को इज़्ज़त देना शुरू करें, जब तक वह प्रकाशित नहीं हो जाता या लंबे समय तक लिखता नहीं रहता जैसी कंडीशन न लगाएं। कोई टैलेंटेड हैं, बिना कॉपी किये मेहनत कर रहा है तो उसका सम्मान होना चाहिए। अक्सर कई लोगो को कहते देखता हूँ कि "फैन फिक्शन कुछ नहीं है", दुख होता है क्योकि एक समय मुझे याद है इस कुछ नहीं के चक्कर में मैंने कितना समय, पैसे और प्रयास लगाए थे और मेरे जैसे कई लोग थे/हैं। खैर, जब अपनी कम्युनिटी लेखकों को उचित सम्मान देना शुरू करेगी तभी बाकी लोग कुछ समझेंगे।
लेख का अंत इस बात से करूँगा कि अगर कोई आईडिया आपने कभी फैन फिक्शन में इस्तेमाल किया हो तो उसे भूलकर छोड़ ना दें, हो सकता है आगे कभी वो कांसेप्ट कहीं और बेहतर जगह प्रयोग में लाया जा सके।
Monday, 29 September 2014
Rasheed Kappan Article
Indian artists vs Western icons (Deccan Herald)
- Rasheed Kappan
Pic - Star Artist Mr. Abhishek Malsuni
Riveted to their globally marketed comic superheroes, thousands headed to the Bangalore Comic Con on Saturday.
On the sidelines of this hugely popular three-day art and illustration extravaganza, a bunch of Indian artists sat defiantly to beckon the youngsters to their brand of kitsch art. They were there to outwit their far superior comic book artists from the West, to carve a niche in a heavily contested market.
Spread out inside the 40,000 sq ft White Orchid Convention Centre at Bagmane Tech Park, the fest had big names from famed American and British comic books:The likes of Dan Parent, artist and writer best known for his work for Archies comics; David Lloyd, the British comics illustrator of the story ‘V for Vendattta’ and the American cartoonist Peter Kruper of the “Spy vs Spy” fame. Sporting masks and merchandise of their creations, seeking their autographs, their young fans ruled the centre.
Yet, the Indian avatars were in no mood to be outdone. Packing a punch, Amar Chitra Katha stood out with a massive pavilion. Its photobooths, quizzes, puppets and story-telling contests were designed to rev up the legendary comic books built on a liberal dose of pop mythology and culture. Raj Comics had book launches galore. Day 2 saw the unveiling of the Ravanayan Finale and The Kaurava Empire series.
Hovering artists
Outside this comic book straightjacket hovered artists such as Vikram Nandwani. He had given up his high-paying Infosys job to rebrand himself as a graphic designer, an artist hooked onto vector drawings and water colours to be reflected on flashy art merchandise. His “Verry India” brand had his art on T-shirts, bags, mousepads, laptops and iPad slings, clutches and wallets.
Sameer Hazari was another engineer-turned-artist challenging the global crowd-pullers. Graduating from PES Institute of Technology here, he had realised early that his real call was art. So he packed off to London, finishing his Master of Fine Arts from Middlesex. The next six years, he reinvented himself, packaging his paintings on usable stuff. “I sensed it was the best thing.
My works resonates with the younger crowd. It gets easier to connect with them when the art works are put on mugs and T-shirts and more,” he explained to Deccan Herald.
Art merchandising was precisely what drove Mumbai-based Jenny Bhatt to print her works on coasters and iPhone covers. Under her banner, “Moksha Shots,” Bhatt had her exclusive range of art toys and abstract ethnic icons to beckon the crowds.
“I know it will take time for Indian artists to make a mark. Indians automatically gravitate to anything foreign. But the younger crowds are showing interest, they are open to check what we do too,” said she.
Monday, 18 August 2014
Graphic Designs - Trisha Gupta
One of the primary aims of the Delhi-based German Book Office (GBO) is to explore different aspects of book publishing in India and find ways of developing them further. A few years ago, for instance, their focus on children’s book publishing led to the establishment of an annual programme called Jumpstart, whose fifth instalment is due to unfold in Delhi and Bangalore at the end of this month. In general, most Indian publishers and editors do not have sufficient opportunities to meet their international counterparts and see how things happen in other markets. As a joint venture between the Frankfurt Book Fair and the Foreign Office, Berlin, the GBO is well-placed to facilitate such contact. With this in mind, it organises an annual editors’ trip to Germany, centred on a different genre each year.
This year, the trip focused on graphic books and young adult (YA) writing, enabling editors from five Indian publishing houses — Penguin Random House, Rupa, Roli, Vani and National Book Trust — to meet representatives of German publishers such as Mosaik, Oetinger, Carlsen, Reprodukt, Carl Hanser, Suhrkamp, S Fischer and Büchergilde.
As presentations and conversations unfolded, it became apparent just how varied and mature German publishing is in these genres, both of which are still nascent in India. German YA fiction, for instance, ranges from tender coming-of-age narratives that take on board issues of race, disability and sexual identity to disturbing, even erotically charged (though not explicit), murder mysteries.
The comic/graphic book scene is even richer. There are independent publishers such as Mosaik, which nurtures the legacy of Abrafaxe, a very popular series that began in East Germany in the 1950s, and Reprodukt, which specialises in graphic novels. There are also larger houses such as Carlsen, which began a Manga imprint in 2000 and also publishes some of the most acclaimed graphic artists, including Isabel Kreitz and Reinhard Kleist.
Considering this range and excellence, it came as a surprise that within the Euro-American universe, Germany is considered a late starter as a comics nation. Andreas Platthaus of the German dailyFrankfurter Allgemeine Zeitung argues that the reason for this was, ironically, the historical popularity of picture stories in Germany: humorous illustrated periodicals became popular in the 19th century, and the strength of that tradition made Germans dismissive of American-style comics, even as they spread through Europe in the early 20th century.
Then came the Nazis, who famously ridiculed comics, making it near-impossible for publishers to promote them. Even after 1945, with American occupation, comics did not really take off in Germany (unlike, say, in Japan).
Thus many Germans started out reading comics from Belgium, France and Italy, and their classics such as Asterix and Tintin remain hugely popular. A visit to X-tra Boox, an excellent little comic bookshop in Frankfurt, revealed the German market’s continuing openness to other cultures, with a top floor filled with Manga in translation and a basement devoted to American superheroes.
It was after German reunification in 1990 that the first generation of avant-garde German graphic artists emerged. Anke Feuchtenberger and others became university professors, helping groom a second wave.
“Now we’re into the third wave and the fourth wave,” said Sebastian Oehler of Reprodukt. “At the end of the ’90s, there was a big discussion on whether comics were art. And now the discussion is, are comics literature?” More graphic artists now address ‘serious’ subjects — like Ulli Lust’s Flying Foxes on World War II, or Nicolas Mahler, who has produced graphic versions of Thomas Bernhard’s Old Masters and The Do-gooders.
The trip also provided occasion for the participating Indian editors to discuss the challenges they face. The German comic reader, while exposed to international comics, reads German books avidly. But one of the problems in India, said Ameya Nagarajan of Penguin Random House, is that Indian readers who actually buy graphic novels prefer to buy wellknown Western names, rather than risking money on Indian newbies. And this, as Nagarajan points out, is that small proportion of readers who are visually literate.
Regional runs
The costs of good-quality graphic publishing are also a real hurdle, especially for smaller publishers. “We are bringing out our first graphic book series on Param Vir Chakra bravery award-winners,” said Neelam Narula of Roli Books. “We had published a non-fiction book on the subject earlier, but the author wanted to reach out to a younger age group, 12-18 years. The first two books are doing well. But to sell these 32-page books at ₹100 each, we had to keep our costs down and increase our print runs.”
The situation is even tougher when it comes to publishing in the regional languages. “Visual culture is the next big thing, but it is still not the choice of the masses,” said Aditi Maheshwari of the Hindi publishing major Vani Prakashan. “We’re trying to create a body of work through translation. But we have to create a buzz for each book.” Vani has just released one of the first graphic books in Hindi, in collaboration with the Japan Foundation.
Neerav Sandhya ka Sheher, Sakura ke Desh is the Hindi translation of an award-winning Manga calledTown of Evening Calm, Country of Cherry Blossoms, on what happened in Hiroshima after the atomic explosion. Also in the pipeline is a Hindi translation of Persepolis.
What about original graphic books in Hindi and other regional languages? “The Vani Foundation has just instituted four ₹20,000 fellowships for writers and illustrators of children’s books,” says Maheshwari. “Selected fellows will get to attend masterclasses at Jumpstart 2014, receive mentoring from Gulzar and Paro Anand, and get a three-book contract with Vani.” It’s going to be a long haul, but it looks like the visual book is here to stay.
(Trisha Gupta is a writer and critic based in Delhi)
Sunday, 17 August 2014
Indian comics revamping India's gods and goddesses
Indian comics are undergoing a revolution, and are beginning to depict Hindu deities such as Shiva, Rama and Vishnu as muscular super-heroes with six packs and bulging biceps.
This is a complete flip from earlier depictions and standard iconography, which generally portray gods in softer, more "delicate" bodies.
Hindu gods "were also warriors. They were supposed to be strong so they could fight anybody," says Satyaki Pal, a 24-year-old business school student who reads graphic novels. The tougher, new look "is appealing to younger people," he says.
Prakash Sharma, a spokesman for Vishva Hindu Parishad — an organisation known for its radical opposition to many activities it perceives as anti-Hindu — says the organization isn't opposed to a presentation of muscular and strong Hindu gods. "But there should not be an effort to change the original character" of the deities, he clarifies.
Young Indians "want to connect to the tradition in a very different manner," says Joseph M.T., assistant professor of sociology at University of Mumbai. The gods' new look has "resonance to an aspiring India at some level."
Traditional depictions are still the norm in India, with calendars, wall portraits, and comic publishers such as Amar Chitra Katha sticking to older styles of depiction. But contemporary artists are taking bold new steps. Twenty-three-year-old Anirudh Sainath Krishnamani says he was disappointed by the fair-skinned and clean-shaven depiction of Lord Rama he saw in the TV serial Ramayana. Rama "was this really macho, warrior kind of person," he says, reflecting on the many rakshasas or demons Rama is said to have killed in the Ramayana epic. He shouldn't be "looking like this really soft and nice-nice person." A recent piece of work by Krishnamani shows a dread-locked, dark-skinned Rama aiming an arrow while riding on Hanuman, the monkey-god, who is flying through the air.
Indian publishers Holy Cow Entertainment, Vimanika Comics and Campfire Graphic Novels have launched a series of such comic books. "We're trying to give cutting-edge art to the same old mythological stories," says Vivek Goel, founder of Holy Cow Entertainment. They are however careful to show respect to the gods, and maintain a sense of appropriateness in depictions. Supporters of these trends says that such adaptations make these deities and their stories more relevant to young Indians living in a world very different from that of their parents.
Saturday, 16 August 2014
Comic Update
Saurav Mohapatra and Vivek Shinde created Mumbai Confidential as an attempt to present (yet another) take on Mumbai’s slimy underbelly. The gritty tale revolves around an ex-encounter cop from Mumbai Police who is going through a major breakdown and a whole lot of other characters who are directly or indirectly connected to a master plan.
When I first opened the shipping cover to get a first look at the book, I was quite impressed with the look of the art and the production values. A premium looking graphic novel, which will make any Indian comic creator or publisher, or even a reader, proud.
What works the most for Mumbai Confidential is the writing style which is structured more like a movie screenplay. Arjun Kadam, an ex-cop, has his life messed up after an incident which ends in tragedy. Things get into a downward spiral when he becomes a victim in a hit-and-run case, in which a street urchin loses her life. After he comes out of coma, Kadam gets his hands dirty in trying to unearth secrets, conspiracies and master plans while trying to bring the urchin’s killer to justice, which builds up to deliver a final twist right in the end.
The narrative is non-linear, it cuts to and fro timelines. This does get confusing at times, but Mohapatra does well to bring things back on track soon. The look and feel is definitely noir-ish. It does justice to the mood of the book and Vivek Shinde does a fantastic job in presenting to us the dark, brooding tones. In fact, the art is the best part of this graphic novel. The writing is good too, but at times it doesn’t quite sound like a gritty Mumbai take. The language could have done with a few more Mumbai references and slang. Not that there isn’t, but it definitely could have done with more. The monologue narrative could have been crisper, more mature than what it is. And there are a lot of clichés which is expected in noir comics. Oh and that twist in the end? I kind of figured it out way before half way into the book. So it was kind of an anticlimax.
Since we have had our dose of Mumbai crime scenes, encounters, gangsters, etc in a spate of Hindi films, the storyline may not really come across as anything out of the ordinary. For the build-up it creates, it could have ended a lot better. But watch out for the Interludes, at the end of the book. These couple of short stories are done extremely well, and I feel probably the entire graphic novel could have been a bunch of short stories revolving round Mumbai cops. But oh well, enough complaining. Having said all that I have, it’s a wonderful addition to your collection, and a matter of pride that such products (gritty and not candyfloss tripe that passes off as graphic novels in India, and not even the uber-superpowered, DC-esque newage mythological comics) get a commercial release in our supersensitive country. It is a brave, confident effort and should be read for sure.
Monday, 30 September 2013
I am really very "Sorry Shaktimaan"
Aug 26
2009
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Ye character sarvsammati se reject hua. I guess that's why inn Uncle ji kay Raj Comics mey mushkil se 15-20 issues aaye honge. Though, Diamond Comics nay Shaktimaan ki thodi zyada comics publish kiye hai. Shaktimaan ki asafalta kay peeche ek se zyada bade kaaran thay.
Awwal to Mukesh Khanna ji ka chehra....unki T.V. series mey makeup kay baad bhi....ahm!....to comic format mey to unki aur bhayankar satya pit gayi..It was the biggest turn off..fir unki body...I mean we want a Super Hero not his "Pitamah"... Kahin na kahin ye bhi lagta tha ki Shaktimaan ki stories were not proper for comic format....Special effects (though not so special) on T.V. were missing in comics.
Jab bachcha tha to jo serial pasand aata tha aur cool lagta tha wo time guzarne kay saath kuch saal baad repeat telecast mey mujhe teen age mey cheap lagne laga....including his comics. Aur koi utsah bhi nahi tha comics mey uski kahani jaanne ka....sab pata hi tha pehle se....upar se bogus villains..except Tamraj Kilvish jinka andhera mere dil mey ab tak kayam hai...he he.
Same old Alter Ego...a dumb reporter....his co-worker Lois Lane...oops...Geeta Vishwaas. Sorry Superman! Kya yaar cheater India waalo....bak!!! Stories were compressed or stretched to fit into then page limits of 30 pages or 60 pages. One more thing, Dheeraj ji and others were not at their best.
Awwal to Mukesh Khanna ji ka chehra....unki T.V. series mey makeup kay baad bhi....ahm!....to comic format mey to unki aur bhayankar satya pit gayi..It was the biggest turn off..fir unki body...I mean we want a Super Hero not his "Pitamah"... Kahin na kahin ye bhi lagta tha ki Shaktimaan ki stories were not proper for comic format....Special effects (though not so special) on T.V. were missing in comics.
Jab bachcha tha to jo serial pasand aata tha aur cool lagta tha wo time guzarne kay saath kuch saal baad repeat telecast mey mujhe teen age mey cheap lagne laga....including his comics. Aur koi utsah bhi nahi tha comics mey uski kahani jaanne ka....sab pata hi tha pehle se....upar se bogus villains..except Tamraj Kilvish jinka andhera mere dil mey ab tak kayam hai...he he.
Same old Alter Ego...a dumb reporter....his co-worker Lois Lane...oops...Geeta Vishwaas. Sorry Superman! Kya yaar cheater India waalo....bak!!! Stories were compressed or stretched to fit into then page limits of 30 pages or 60 pages. One more thing, Dheeraj ji and others were not at their best.
Sequencing of Events in Comics
Sep 19
2009
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There are many ways to set the order of scenes in a story.
First is Simple Chronology in which events are arranged in their order of occurrence in time. Majority of Indian Comics fall under the category of simple chronology.
Second, the evergreen Flashback method in which past events are focused usually following simple chronology and we see story of present in patches.
Third....Plot Mix...under this category sub plots flow parallel with each other and the main story. They almost always have some discreet connection and may meet somewhere. Multistar Comics, two in one comics, are examples of this category....though there are some exceptions in Multiple Main Lead Characters Series.
Fourth, Jumbled Events, following no order whatsoever...till the end when everything falls in place....it's quite challenging for a writer and new, refreshing for readers. Though, these scenes are jumbled but the climax makes every event....and this order meaningful.
Aap bhi agar kisi sequence pattern ko samjhe to yahan sabke saath share kijiye.
- Mohit Sharma (Trendster)
First is Simple Chronology in which events are arranged in their order of occurrence in time. Majority of Indian Comics fall under the category of simple chronology.
Second, the evergreen Flashback method in which past events are focused usually following simple chronology and we see story of present in patches.
Third....Plot Mix...under this category sub plots flow parallel with each other and the main story. They almost always have some discreet connection and may meet somewhere. Multistar Comics, two in one comics, are examples of this category....though there are some exceptions in Multiple Main Lead Characters Series.
Fourth, Jumbled Events, following no order whatsoever...till the end when everything falls in place....it's quite challenging for a writer and new, refreshing for readers. Though, these scenes are jumbled but the climax makes every event....and this order meaningful.
Aap bhi agar kisi sequence pattern ko samjhe to yahan sabke saath share kijiye.
- Mohit Sharma (Trendster)
Story Writing Styles
Nov 11
2009
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Writing is an art full of imagination, experiences, mindsets, preconceived notions, creativity, etc. Story writing can be divided mainly into four styles. This is just my perception...I hope it suits majority. Focus here is on comics.
1. Stories based on Situations/Scenes -
When a story is based on a simple idea and it contains many new, distinct scenes supporting that idea then it is scenes or situations based story. The story is easy to understand with great flow and pace, usually. Many comics under comedy genre are example of scenes based comedy. The scenes are loosely related. The excitement fluctuates within a limit with change in scenes....so, there is relatively less fuss in reader's mind about the climax and start of such stories.
2. Stories based on Characters -
Every now and then we read introduction of new characters, villains. Though, the story still demands scenes and story plot but such stories are overshadowed by the personality of the character(s). His/Her characteristics, powers, past, motives, alter ego, allies, etc. So, it's like a Bio Data in the form of many frames and pages.
3. Stories based on Ideas -
A story is based on ideas, themes, story plots, according to the universe and storyline of a series. A story plot is a general idea which can be used with many series. But the series which best suits the idea can be chosen by the writer. Now, turn this upside down....I mean if one is only thinking about a series then there is one, clear choice for the theme.
4. Message based Stories -
A story based on special message, moral, teaching. Easy to write and understand but is monotonous, lacks freshness. Best for kids under 14 years.
Also some special occasions, events, declarations, changes, etc in real life can inspire fiction.
Villian's Side?
RC aksar apni stories mey villains ki soch ko kaafi kum dikhati hai. Villains ki side ki bahut si baaton ko purani kahaniyon kay hisaab se dikhaya jaata hai. Jaise kuch villains ka apradh karte rehna par uske peeche koi logical reason na hona, Fights kay waqt often hero apne rival se 10-12 guna zyada sochta hua dikhaya jaata hai, etc. Aisa hamesha se hota aa raha hai.
Villains kay bahut se overused, stereotype, dialogues ab bahut bachkane lagte hai. Jaise sabhi random villains ka trademark "Ha Ha Ha......", kisi hero ko maarne ya pakadne ki taiyari karne kay baad agar wo hero villain kay saamne aa jaaye to villain kehta hai...."Arre, Bheriya...tum yahan?"....jaise wo villain Bheriya ki jagah Gamraj ka aana expect kar raha tha.
Mere kehne ka matlab hai ki aise dialogues aur baaton ka use hona chahiye par bahut zyada nahi.
Kahani sirf hero nahi banata balki zyadatar kahaniyan villains kay kiye kaamo kay aas-paas ghoomti hai....to itney important kirdaaro ki aisi andekhi kyu?
Villains kay bahut se overused, stereotype, dialogues ab bahut bachkane lagte hai. Jaise sabhi random villains ka trademark "Ha Ha Ha......", kisi hero ko maarne ya pakadne ki taiyari karne kay baad agar wo hero villain kay saamne aa jaaye to villain kehta hai...."Arre, Bheriya...tum yahan?"....jaise wo villain Bheriya ki jagah Gamraj ka aana expect kar raha tha.
Kahani sirf hero nahi banata balki zyadatar kahaniyan villains kay kiye kaamo kay aas-paas ghoomti hai....to itney important kirdaaro ki aisi andekhi kyu?
Main lead character hamesha achchha aur sachcha ho ye zaroori nahi hai. Kisi villain kay point of view se kahani aage badh sakti hai. Aisa videsho ki publications aur film industries karti aayi hai.
Mujhe lagta hai 'Aghori' iss concept kay liye sahi rahega.
Kya RC ko aisi series laani chahiye jisme story kisi villain ya galat kaam karne waale character ko mukhya role mey rakh kar likhi gayi ho?
Kya readers aise character(s) ko accept kar paayenge?
Mujhe lagta hai 'Aghori' iss concept kay liye sahi rahega.
Kya RC ko aisi series laani chahiye jisme story kisi villain ya galat kaam karne waale character ko mukhya role mey rakh kar likhi gayi ho?
Kya readers aise character(s) ko accept kar paayenge?
Pehle to gundey Hero kay vaaro par kuch aise thought balloons dete thay.
"Ye haath hai ya hathoda". (Comic - Dynamite)
Aise aur bhi examples hai.
So, RC please show every villain's thinking and dialogues properly.
"Ye haath hai ya hathoda". (Comic - Dynamite)
Aise aur bhi examples hai.
So, RC please show every villain's thinking and dialogues properly.
Story or Stardom?
Aug 25
2010
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Often, one reads comments of fans like " Gamraj, Super Indian, etc, should be dropped" , "Dhruv is the best.", "Steel is worst", etc. I am not complaining as we like or dislike any character according to his record.
But I want to say is that what matters is treatment of a comic in terms of artwork and story. I dont want to take names of creatives but imagine a Nagraj comics with artwork like regular Gamraj. Doga is best then why fans "uwaak" on a Gamraj-Doga combo ?
As RC team is not with a huge creative force they tend to implement their best resources (creatives) in best characters (according to fans feedbacks) and often rest characters are just a formality for set completion ans series continuation. This kind of "tag" system ruins a character permanently. Many...many possibilities in the storylines of Parmanu, Anthony, Shakti, Fighter Toads, Gamraj, etc, are unexploited. RC should give fair treatment to its every character. Then such comments and comparisons should be done.
But I want to say is that what matters is treatment of a comic in terms of artwork and story. I dont want to take names of creatives but imagine a Nagraj comics with artwork like regular Gamraj. Doga is best then why fans "uwaak" on a Gamraj-Doga combo ?
As RC team is not with a huge creative force they tend to implement their best resources (creatives) in best characters (according to fans feedbacks) and often rest characters are just a formality for set completion ans series continuation. This kind of "tag" system ruins a character permanently. Many...many possibilities in the storylines of Parmanu, Anthony, Shakti, Fighter Toads, Gamraj, etc, are unexploited. RC should give fair treatment to its every character. Then such comments and comparisons should be done.
Mere kehne ka matlab hai jab kuch characters ko "elite" ka tag dekar unpar kaam ho raha hai aur kuch characters par ordinary efforts lag rahe hai. To jin par ordinary kaam ho raha hai wo apne aap kaise sabki pasand ban sakte hai?
Originally Posted on RC Forums between 2007-2009
Parodies by Raj Comics
Aug 25
2010
| Parodies by Raj Comics
Posted by: TRENDSTER on Aug 25, 2010
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Kisi famous work ko imitate karke humorous tareke se dobara banana Parody kehlata hai. 1996 -1997 mey Raj Comics kuch Parodies publish kar chuki hai. Ye parodies kuch Hindi Blockbuster movies par based thi. # - 'Bill waale Dhamkiyan De Jaayenge' (Dil waale Dulhaniya Le Jaayenge),
# - 'Hum Aapke hai Bhow - Bhow' (Hum Aapke hai Kaun),
# - 'Bhaagi Ghar' (Baazigar).
Ye comic strips Nagraj fan club (aur RC fans) ki magazine kay roop mey launch ki gayi thi aur inke Third issue se inka naam 'Fang' rakha gaya. Fang kay first issue mey 'Bhaagi Ghar' kay saath Cherry, Sady, Friendy, ki comic strips chhapi thi. Movie ki story kay saath saath uske songs ki bhi parody ki gayi thi. Kyoki ye RC kay parody mey apni tarah kay pehle efforts thay isliye ye stories aur artworks theek thak thay. Kisi nay RC ki ye parodies padhi hai?
Kya RC ko aage bhi achchhe concepts aur artworks kay saath Parodies publish karni chahiye?
Waise kuch comics kay scenes mey mashoor incidents, films, etc, ki parody ki jaati hai. Celebrities jaise naam aur style waale chhote characters bhi kabhi - kabhi Fighter Toads aur Gamraj ki comics mey khoob comedy karte hai. Ek Bankey Lal ki comic to Ramayan ki parody thi. Mujhe uska naam yaad nahi. To kya aap RC dwara banayi gayi parodies ko aage padhna chahte hai?
Parodies karne kay liye unka subject selection (jis par wo based ho) bahut zaroori hai kyoki galat subject ki comedy se bahut se readers hurt ho sakte hai. For example kai ideologies, cultures, ki drawbacks ko basis bana kar badhiya parodies to ban sakti hai lekin unke content mey kab kisi ka anjaane mey mazaak ban jaaye ya limit cross ho jaaye pata nahi chalta. Shayad isliye hi parodies kum aati hai.
Parodies ko safal banane kay liye 2 baatein bahut important hai. Pehli to yeh ki wo kisi fictional work par based ho, saath hi satire aur parody ko indirect way mey likhne se unka zyada asar bhi hota hai aur writer ko freedom bhi milti hai.
Great Clashes (Raj Comics)
Aug 25
2010
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Kisi action Superhero ka asal test uske fight sequences mey hota hai. Saath hi uski powers aur dimaag ko naye naye tareko se challenges milte rehte hai. RC nay ab tak apne lagbhag sabhi kirdaaro ko lekar kai shaandaar fight sequences banaye hai.
Jab kisi kirdaar ko apni saari shakityon aur uplabdh sansadhano kay alawa bhi kai aise tareke soochne padte hai jinse wo apne pratidwandi aur vikat paristhitiyon se paar paa sake, aise fight sequences general readers ko bahut pasand aate hai.
Action based solo comics mey Superhero kay kisi shaktishaali villain se takraane kay alawa Multi starer aur 2 in 1 comics mey bhi unexpected aur alag tarah kay takraav dekhne ko milte hai. 2 in 1 comics mey agar dono Superheroes ek doosre kay virrudh hon to unke takraav ko zyadatar achcha 'footage' milta hai. Junglistaan, Aadhe insaan, Takkar, Mard aur Murda, Thandi aag, Pralay, iss category kay kuch behtereen udahran hai.
Iss Topic aap mey aise hi yaadgaar fight sequences, unse juddi baaton kay baare mey discuss kar sakte hai aur kaun se anokhe takraav aapko behadd pasand aaye wo bhi likhiye. Agar aap kinhi 2 ya zyada dumdaar kirdaaro ka takraav khud likhna chahein to bhi aapka swagat hai.
Jab kisi kirdaar ko apni saari shakityon aur uplabdh sansadhano kay alawa bhi kai aise tareke soochne padte hai jinse wo apne pratidwandi aur vikat paristhitiyon se paar paa sake, aise fight sequences general readers ko bahut pasand aate hai.
Action based solo comics mey Superhero kay kisi shaktishaali villain se takraane kay alawa Multi starer aur 2 in 1 comics mey bhi unexpected aur alag tarah kay takraav dekhne ko milte hai. 2 in 1 comics mey agar dono Superheroes ek doosre kay virrudh hon to unke takraav ko zyadatar achcha 'footage' milta hai. Junglistaan, Aadhe insaan, Takkar, Mard aur Murda, Thandi aag, Pralay, iss category kay kuch behtereen udahran hai.
Iss Topic aap mey aise hi yaadgaar fight sequences, unse juddi baaton kay baare mey discuss kar sakte hai aur kaun se anokhe takraav aapko behadd pasand aaye wo bhi likhiye. Agar aap kinhi 2 ya zyada dumdaar kirdaaro ka takraav khud likhna chahein to bhi aapka swagat hai.
Anupam ji fight sequences kay specialist hai. Unhone khaaskar Dhruv ki zyadatar comics mey bahut hi romanchak fight sequences diye hai. Apni Multi starer comics mey bhi unhone kai unusual combinations ka shaandaar takraav dikhaya hai jinke baare mey hum sirf sochte thay ki agar ye do kirdaar ek doosre se takraaye to kya hoga ?
'Kohraam' mey kahani ko jagah jagah par compliment karti fights wo bhi itne saare alag alag combinations kay saath. Wo sach mey ek behtareen comic thi......par tab 128 pages bhi thay. Ab to Kohraam jaise kisi project par 40 se 43 pages ki 3 comics ki series aayegi jisme continuity naa honay ki wajah se uski 1 comic utna mazaa nahi de paayegi.
'Kohraam' mey kahani ko jagah jagah par compliment karti fights wo bhi itne saare alag alag combinations kay saath. Wo sach mey ek behtareen comic thi......par tab 128 pages bhi thay. Ab to Kohraam jaise kisi project par 40 se 43 pages ki 3 comics ki series aayegi jisme continuity naa honay ki wajah se uski 1 comic utna mazaa nahi de paayegi.
- Mohit Sharma (Trendster / Trendy Baba)
Monday, 16 September 2013
Artist Atharv Thakur (Ichchhadhari Aghori Artwork)
ICHHADHARI AGHORI.... (Artist - Atharv Thakur)
dear frnds...... here i m posting my old entry of aghori fan art contest frm holy cow entertainment.....
yhan baat jo k me share krna chahta hu aap sbhi se.... holy cow k fan art contest k barey me to almost fans ko pta hi hoga... unn dino me nagraj bna rha tha to post like always.... thn mujhe ek frnd ne aghori fan art contest k barey me btaya... maine mohit sharma ji se suggession manga to unhone kaha k aap lady aghori try kro....ya couple Aghoris. maine try b kiya but bna nhi.... phr mere samne sawal tha k ab kya kiya jaye..... tbhi achanak nagraj pur najar padi.... shaitani ideaz aana shuru huye... maine eraser liya aur final editing shuru kr di
thodi hi der me nagraj k hairs and shave badh chuki thi aur costume b change ho chuka tha ab nagraj k pas costume k naam pur kya h wo to aap log jante hi hain
so iss tarah meri entry ready hui contest k liye.... ise agr aap bahut dhyaan se dekhenge to kahin na kahin aapko nagraj ki jahalak mil jayegi....
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